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Book Review: Writing Devotionals That Stick by Kathy Widenhouse

26 Thursday Jan 2017

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Title: Writing Devotionals that Stick: A Step-by-Step Guide for Writing This Unique Genre for Today’s Busy Readers

Author: Kathy Widenhouse

Published: 10/29/2016

Pages: 143 (Kindle)

Blurb: Writing Devotionals That Stick is a writing guide that shows step-by-step how to write devotionals (a unique genre in the faith-based market) in a way that stays with today’s busy, distracted readers.

Leaders, entrepreneurs, students, moms, professionals, Christian writers (or those who want to be), and many others who want to share their experiences with God have learned to write sticky devotionals and meditations by using the principles found in this book. It’s a fun and easy-to-use guide packed with examples, writing tips, and “Try This” exercises to help you put the steps into practice right away. Author Kathy Widenhouse shares these principles drawn from 15 years of her experience producing hundreds of devotionals for clients, leaders, and publishers.

My Thoughts: This book fills a very specific need in a very specific niche for writing. In spite of its narrow focus, this is a book that I would heartily recommend to all kinds of writers, not just ones who are looking to write devotionals. There is so much good, practical advice in here that all writers can benefit from many of these pointers. We should all desire for our writing, whether fiction or non-fiction or devotional, to be sticky with our readers.

Whether she is discussing what a devotional actually is, how to identify the readers you are trying to write for, or what makes content sticky, Widenhouse’s content itself is sticky. The chapters are short, to-the-point, and center around only one point within the topic. This is something I try to get across to my Composition students, the necessity of drilling into only one topic at a time in order to make that part of the paper more effective. I could see the wisdom in this book being something that could apply to an entry-level composition class.

Overall, I would certainly recommend this book to anyone who is writing, whether you have an interest in devotionals or not. It is a short read that can be managed in small chunks and, in fact, it is designed to because many chapters end with some tasks that you can do to put the principle covered into action. I have aspirations to someday write a devotional, and I know that I will be pulling this back out again when the time comes to work on that.

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Guest Post: Are You a Writer?

09 Monday May 2016

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Today we have a special guest post from Josh Brown. If you missed his guest post last month, be sure to check that one out as well! Read on to get challenged to answer the question: are you a writer or an author?

Are You A Writer?

Writers. I know you’ve seen them. You totally know the type. They like to write stories and are constantly trolling freelance writing ads or Facebook “calls for submission” groups, desperately trying to find the next themed anthology or literary zine that will accept their short fiction. These writers, they write—no doubt about that—and occasionally they even get published. But it’s what happens after they get published that matters.

What do writers do after getting published? Nothing. They’re too busy, well, writing. They’re banging out the next short story that will at best earn them $0.03/word or a split of profits that are non-existent and will never exist. They might have a blog, but it’s filled with pictures of cat memes, and their Twitter feed is a ghost town. Writers write, but they don’t do much else, and that’s what holds them back from evolving into authors.

Authors, on the other hand, are forward-thinking. They don’t just care about writing the best story possible, they care about what happens after the story is written. Once it is accepted. Once it is published out into the world. What then? Then, the real work begins.

In this day and age, being an author also means being an entrepreneur and a self-promoter. You need to write a great story, sell it, and then market/promote it. Those writers who are not putting forth every single effort to promote their published work are missing a step in this whole process. The easiest way to promote your published story is to announce it to all your friends and family on Facebook. Hopefully I don’t have to tell you that that is not enough. You need to get the word out on all social media: Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc. You need to engage with your fans, with the community at large. You need to have a blog where you can not only talk about your own work, but also the work of your peers, as well as other relevant topics that may interest your audience. You need to establish a brand, build a following. You need to write great stories.

I’m here to tell you that being a writer is different than being an author, and if you aspire to be successful in today’s publishing landscape, you need to be an author.

Don’t get sucked in to the writer trap. You deserve better; you owe it to yourself to follow through and to be an author.

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JoshBrownJosh Brown is the writer and creator of “Shamrock,” a fantasy/adventure comic that appears regularly in Fantasy Scroll Mag. His comic work has appeared numerous places, including Alterna Tales from Alterna Comics and the award-winning Negative Burn. His poetry and short fiction can be found in Star*Line, Beechwood Review, Scifaikuest, SpeckLit, and a variety of anthologies such as Lovecraft After Dark (JWK Fiction), Dystopian Express (Hydra Publications), King of Ages: A King Arthur Anthology (Uffda Press), and many more. Recently, he served as guest editor for issue 20 of Eye to the Telescope, the official online journal of the Science Fiction Poetry Association (SFPA).

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Writing First Drafts

24 Thursday Mar 2016

Posted by David Wiley in Writing, Writing Resources

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First Drafts, Manuscript, Writer's Toolbox, Writing

When it comes time to put pen to paper, or fingers to keyboard, there are obstacles that can get in the way of completing a first draft. This is, by far, the most important step to the process of writing a story or a novel, but there are an endless array of pitfalls standing between starting and finishing the project regardless of word count. Knowing how to overcome these obstacles are what separates those who wish they could be writers from the writers. Here are three techniques that I have found helpful when it comes to writing my own drafts:

Develop a Writing Routine and Stick to it

Raise your hand if you have ever thought to yourself “I should be writing, but I just don’t feel like it right now.” Yep, guilty as charged here as well. Yet I have never finished a writing session that I regretted doing, no matter how much I resisted it before beginning to write. It is easy to prioritize other things, and when you finally have the unplanned free time everything else sounds far more appealing than grinding out some words. As with most things, it takes time to develop a good writing habit. One of the best ways to accomplish this habit is to form a schedule or a routine and stick to it.

Some people advocate writing every day, and in an ideal world that is what we should all aim for. But there are pockets of time each week that we could pencil in the time to write. Find those times, even if they are only 15-30 minute windows, and dedicate one of those each day to writing. Set goals for each writing session, whether it be a time limit (I will sit and write for 15 uninterrupted minutes) or a word count objective (I will sit at my desk until I add at least 500 words to my current project). And stick to it. Figure out the times, and the requirements, that work best for you and then write. Don’t have email, Facebook, Twitter, or anything else open in another window. Put your phone on silent, if possible. Get your writing music playlist going before the timer begins if you are setting a time limit and don’t open it to change songs. Just write.

Relinquish control to your characters

If you are a planner, this advice will be paramount to the worst type of torture. You’ve spent hours developing an idea of how the next scene should play out. You dedicated months to detailing out a strict outline with a flow of events that take you from point A of the novel to point B in the novel. You know what the characters should do, what they should say, and what they had for breakfast for the last three months. But when you start to write they throw a curve ball at you and start to do something else.

Let them.

This is the first draft, after all, and when it comes time to revise your work you can straighten them out and get things back on the track they were supposed to follow. I love the advice of Anne Lamott in Bird by Bird regarding the first draft. She calls it the child’s draft, and suggests that even if your character wants to quip, “Well so what, Mr. Poopy Pants” at some point, you let them. Because it may take pages of unproductive nonsense to get to a point where you write something so strong and beautiful and incredible that you would never have reached by more adult, methodical methods.

It is great to have a plan. But don’t be afraid to do a little pantsing while writing the first draft. Your writing mind might uncover an excellent addition to your story through very unconventional means.

Don’t stop, don’t overthink, just write

When I am writing my rough draft there is a little voice inside that wants me to stop. It hates the momentum I am building because it sees all the little things that I should fix, or could improve upon, or need to research more about to make sure it is accurate. It has taken time and practice, but I have begun to ignore this voice because it is a draft killer. It wants me to get bogged down in the details of the stuff I have already written, preventing me from ever reaching the completion of the manuscript. And we all have been guilty, or know someone who has been guilty, of getting completely derailed by this voice. How can you tell?

If your chapter one has been touched up a dozen times and still is not quite perfect, but chapter two still hasn’t been written. If you have abandoned projects collecting dust, not due to them being uninteresting but because the inspiration flamed out before you could get anywhere close to the end. If you’ve spent hours reading about the nuances of a culture or profession in order to be accurate before sitting down to write a page or two of a scene before moving on in the manuscript.

Avoid the pitfalls of listening to this voice! You will misspell words and write sentences in the passive voice. You will write choppy and forced dialogue. You can have a big [INSERT DETAILS ABOUT SMELTING IRON ORE HERE] in your first draft. You don’t need to fix the little things in order to continue! The most important thing, from my own experience, is getting to the end first. Then you can go back and revise to your heart’s content, spending weeks immersed in detailed research or hours rewriting a single paragraph until it is perfect. Because you will already have a finished product in front of you, something that you can say is written. You might spend years revising a manuscript, going over it 7 times before it is ready to send off (or before you get something other than rejections), but at least it will be done. Reaching the end is something every aspiring writer dreams of.

Not all of them make it there. Be the exception and write your heart out. You can clean up the messy stuff later.

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Coming Soon: A Monthly Newsletter

25 Thursday Feb 2016

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If you happen to be looking, you might just see to the right side of the page that there is a new little snippet and a link to subscribe to a newsletter.

That’s right, I will be putting out a newsletter each month, starting hopefully in March.

What sort of great and wonderful things will you find there? Exclusives that non-subscribers will miss out upon, which could be samples of what I’m working on, notifications of when publications that have my stories go on sale, writing tips, and who knows what else may come your way.

Honestly, I don’t know what they will look like yet, but I promise they will be worth signing up for because they will have something that no one else will get to see. And, as a further sweetener to the deal, when you sign up you will get an email back within a week that will contain a short excerpt from my short story, “The Saga of Artur Uthersson”, which was featured in the King of Ages: A King Arthur Anthology.

And, as an even better bonus, there will be a code that you can use to save 20% off your purchase of a paperback copy of King of Ages.

So click here and sign up for the newsletter. I promise to only send out one newsletter a month unless there happens to be breaking news, such as a signed book contract. Which, when that day comes, will be the sort of news worth breaking immediately.

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A New Contributor Emerges

24 Wednesday Feb 2016

Posted by David Wiley in Writing

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When I decided to start things back up on the blog I was unclear about the direction I wanted to go with this blog. Up until now it has been predominantly book reviews, and will continue to have a good share of reviews for the books I read and recommend. A previous version of this blog, a few years ago, existed primarily to post things as I wrote them and share them with the world. During that time I was a part of a Fab Four of emerging authors, and I have remained connected with one of them.

It started about a week ago when she asked if I would be interested in writing a guest post to appear on their writer’s website, Our Write Side. I readily agreed and am still planning to fulfill that initial promise.

But this morning it evolved.

I have now accepted a spot as a contributor on Our Write Side. What does this entail? Writing and sharing at least one post a month about an aspect of writing. Which is going to be cool. Look for the contributions to begin in March.

And, perhaps, a new story to be included in a Literary Journal coming in April…

You can already visit Our Write Side to read my short story, “Midnight Flight“, and check out some of the other excellent content there!

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February Features

23 Saturday Jan 2016

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We are just over a week away from the calendar turning to February, and already I can announce some exciting things for that month. On Sunday, February 7th the first part of a short story, called “Midnight Flight”, will be published on My Write Side. The following Sunday the other half will get published, so it will be featured in two segments. This story is a fun and whimsical fantasy story that I think you will enjoy, so be sure to check it out when the links become available.

The other thing is that my short story, “The First Martian Church of God”, which has been accepted but without a scheduled publish date for ages, finally has a publish date! That will go live on Sci Phi Journal on February 25th and I can’t wait for you to read my most Bradbury-esque Science Fiction story to date.

In writing news, I have two short stories being written. One is the third Monster Hunter short story and the other is a dark Sci-Fi thriller. I also have a lot of brainstormed ideas about the direction I will be taking my manuscript that I hope to write this year. I think that, by the time I get these two short stories done, I will be ready to start in on that project and will have a clear idea about the major points the novel will follow.

I have made a new page at the top that tracks the books I am reading. So far I have only finished one, an audiobook, but that is because Monte Cristo is such a long read (which is over halfway done!) and my other audiobook I was listening to was also such a long one (and when it gets checked back in I can finish off the final 4-5 hours of that one!) so that list will start to grow sooner or later.

Watch for some reviews to get up on some of what I read this year, although I doubt I will commit to writing a full review for all of them.

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The Other Side of Writing

20 Monday Jul 2015

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Writing is something that is enjoyable. Being able to sit and interact with the characters of a story, to follow along as they lead you into situations and resolutions you hadn’t expected, is something that never grows old. Just like Tolkien, I love to subcreate. I love to tell stories and to know that my audience, whether that audience is one or a thousand, has enjoyed hearing that tale. When the mood is right, there is nothing better than to sit and get lost while writing a story for hours.

Unfortunately there is another aspect of writing, the other side of the writing process that is the red-headed stepchild. I don’t know if there are many writers that get as enthusiastic about sitting down to edit their work as they get when writing something fresh and new. And I understand completely – when you are editing you are only modifying a story that you’ve already told. Editing can be as boring as just changing some spelling and grammar issues. Other times it can involve a complete reshaping of a story to the point where it is almost brand new.

I’m caught in the midst of an editing storm. I spent the past two weeks editing through my first novel and the end result was a much better, and longer, product. Looking back at my first draft in 2013 I can see just from the word count that it has nearly doubled in size while maintaining many of the same key plot elements. And the odds are good that, if I find an agent, I will be editing it at least once more before it gets published (although I hope that requires a lot less work!).

I finished that task yesterday only to be rewarded with the pre-print proofs of the anthology. So now I will spend this week looking for those minor spelling and grammar issues to be fixed in my story and get that back into the hands of the publisher. That is an unexciting, but essential, round of edits.

And then I got back an unusual rejection around a week ago. I had submitted a long narrative poem (titled “Taking Down Goliath”) to a publication and they rejected it but said if I would like to rework it that I would be welcome to resubmit it again. That is the best kind of rejection as it means there is great hope for an edited edition to get that acceptance. So before diving into a new Monster Huntress story or book I will probably return to that poem from a few years ago and edit it with a fresh set of eyes.

The other side of writing isn’t always as fun or as exciting as writing, but it is very important for turning those rejections (or potential rejections) into published works.

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A Writer’s Favorite Word to Write

19 Friday Jul 2013

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There are a lot of words that a writer has at their disposal. In the English language alone there is a dictionary full of them, not to mention hundreds of other languages in the world. Some authors are even crazy enough to create their own languages, particularly in the Science Fiction and Fantasy genres. Yet no matter how many words a writer uses, it is safe to say there is one they prefer to write above all others. It is the holy grail of words, signifying achievement.

That word is, simply, “END”.

Last night I reached that achievement. There is a big difference between completing a 1,000 word flash fiction story on this blog and a 10,000 word story. My serial blog series, Curse of Fierabras, was a longer achievement in terms of length but the satisfaction of concluding that was nowhere near the satisfaction from finishing my latest writing project because it wasn’t broken into fifteen posts.

That one word is the beginning of a transition, moving the project from an incomplete first draft into a work that is under revision. The easy task of writing the story is done, and now it falls on the writer and their beta readers to polish the rough patches of inconsistency and choppy dialogue.

But amidst the incoming waves of rejection (3 so far this month, including one just last night) there is a cause for celebration. It is a rejuvenating sensation that trickles through every fiber of my being, delighting in completion. The task of revision will come soon enough, but it can wait until I am done basking in this elation.

There are more stories to tell. Beta readers to recruit to read the story with a critical eye and offer honest input (a rare thing to find! Interested?). Smaller stories to revise and submit. And books to read. Always books to read.

But for now I shall share another sample from the completed story while I  revel in the joy that comes from writing one little word.

END

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Ava squatted low to the ground, observing the prints from a distance. Edgar had been right in his description of the tracks, but something didn’t seem right to Ava. She crept closer, skirting along the edge of some thick mud near the prints. She strained, leaning in as far as she could, staring at the tracks for a missing sign. When she realized what it was, she sat up with a scowl on her face.

“These are fresh enough,” she said slowly, “but something isn’t right about them. Edgar, what do you see that is missing?”

Edgar crept closer, hesitating to get too close as he peered at the tracks in the mud. “I see two prints there before it disappears into the grass and bushes beyond. Nothing is unusual about there not being more prints.”

“True, but how could it make these prints along that edge without leaving more in this mud down here? It would have passed right through this, and left an obvious trail behind.”

“Maybe it jumped?” Edgar offered.

“Maybe you forged these tracks to get me down here,” Ava said. She stared at Edgar, a cold glimmer in her eyes. Edgar looked away, fidgeting under her stare. He looked up to confess when a deep grumble in the distance made them both pause. Ava raised a hand, signaling for silence as she turned toward the noise. The grumble repeated a few moments later, answered by a higher-pitched whistling noise. Ava slipped a knife from her belt, handing it to Edgar before unsheathing her sword. She motioned for him to follow, stealthily moving toward the noises.

They ducked behind a large rock when they were close, listening for a change in the sounds. Hearing nothing, Ava peeked around the edge. “Goblins,” she whispered to Edgar when she pulled back, “three of them are asleep in the clearing. They must be a scouting party.”

“Scouting what?”

“I bet they are checking out the village, to see if we’re undefended now that father is gone. We can’t let them report back or we’ll have the whole horde swarming down on us.”

“But there are three of them and only two of us.”

“There is one on the left, just around the rock. You take him, and I will get the other two.”

“I’ve never killed a monster before,” Edgar whispered back, concerned. “What if I miss and it claws my eyes out or rips my heart from my chest?”

“It is sleeping. It’ll be dead before it knows we’re attacking. My father will be surprised when he gets home and sees three goblin heads.”

Ava motioned for Edgar to circle around the rock. She clutched her knife in her hand, creeping toward the sleeping goblins. They were as hideous and disfigured as she had always imagined, having heard her father describe them in a dozen tales. Their skin was a pale green and looked like rough, bumpy leather. Their joints were knobby, sticking out at angles that looked painful. Thick, pointy ears stretched above the crown of their heads and a long, crooked nose jutted from their face. She watched one snoring, seeing the rows of small, sharp teeth that could tear the flesh off a man with ease. Small patches of wispy yellow hair were matted down atop their heads, making them all look as though they were going bald.

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Flip Flop Fiction – Thieveses

07 Friday Jun 2013

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This past week I have been honored to collaborate with SAM at My Write Side on a tale for her new Flip Flop Fiction series. What happens is we work together on a story that takes a familiar literary character and flips them into another literary world. This transportation comes courtesy of the Hatter from Alice in Wonderland, and this week I chose to send Gollum from The Hobbit/Lord of the Rings into a new world. It was a lot of fun, and I hope you’ll check it out and leave some comments over there on this new story.

And while you’re there, be sure to check out on of my favorite ongoing works of fiction: The Elven Games. You’ll be hard-pressed to find better Fantasy Fiction on web!

Flip Flop Fiction #3 – Thieveses

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First Watch

11 Saturday May 2013

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The night air was brisk, cutting through the cloak draped over his frail figure. A fire burned down in the center of the camp, the flames flickering into the air as it consumed the dry logs, but its warmth seemed to do nothing to combat the chill in his bones. His companions slept around him, rolled snug in a ring around the campfire. Their snores echoed softly into the dreadful night, overridden by the hoots and shrieks of the wildlife around them. He jumped at every new sound, a small dirk trembling in his pale fingers.

He shouldn’t be like this. After all, he was the son of a knight and his grandfather was a knight. He was pretty sure the knighthood could be traced back across dozens of generations. Warrior blood ran strong through his family’s veins, but somehow it decided to skip a generation the night Tyriel was born. It resumed three years later when his sister, Rhys, was brought into the world. Everyone knew that she should be the one out here leading this expedition, but his father would hear none of it. He said it was time that Tyriel stepped up and earned his keep as the future heir to the tower.

The men with him all thought he was craven, and Tyriel wished that he could prove them wrong just once. But it was hard to be courageous and bold when every sound in the forest made him panic. He feared an ambush at every turn, saw rabid eyes in every beast, and felt cold steel swinging down every night when he slept. And now, after three weeks, they finally forced him to take a watch during the night. They gave him the first watch, reassuring him that if there were to be an attack it would come during second or third watch instead. Tyriel didn’t believe them.

It was dreadful out here, under the open skies and among the wilderness. Even though the open land stretched far beyond his sight in each direction, he felt more confined here than he had been at home. Things had been much better when he had been hidden, snug within the safe walls of the tower, buried beneath stacks of tomes in the library. Nothing bothered him up there, apart from the thick layers of dust, because no one else held any interest in the ancient books and scrolls. But Tyriel felt that the information contained in them was far more important than knowing how to swing a sword or shoot a bow and hit a target on horseback. Knowledge was a superior weapon, and he would prove it if he could ever get his nerves under control.

A log in the fire popped, making Tyriel jump to his feet. His dirk fell from his hands, the clattering of steel on stone startling him further. An owl hooted in the darkness and Tyriel spun toward the sound. His eyes hunted the depths of the blackness before him, willing the haunts of the night to reveal themselves to him. When nothing emerged from the depths he squatted down, retrieving his dirk. He felt, for the first time in his life, an odd comfort in having a weapon in his hand. He eased back to his perch, peering into the perilous night with a new sense of calm under his command.

The night crept by in silence as Tyriel struggled to remain awake. His watch was nearly over, judging by the flames of the campfire. It had been an easy watch, like they had said it would be, once he had his nerves in check. He was a far cry from becoming a knight, but at least it could be said he was no craven fool anymore. He felt control, a new sensation, and he relished it. He welcomed what the night had in store for him now, thinking there was no sight nor sound that could rattle his resolve.

He could hear the wind’s menacing howl before he felt its icy tendrils caressing his body. The dwindling flames in the campfire struggled to cling to life as the wind relentlessly assaulted their camp. Thick clouds blanketed the moon and stars above as the final embers were snuffed out, leaving Tyriel shrouded in darkness. His newfound confidence drained as the night sounds emerged in a terrifying crescendo. Bushes rustled, twigs snapped, and noises echoes from every direction. He spun toward each sound, holding his dirk with white knuckles, his tongue mute in spite of attempts to sound an alarm. He stumbled toward his companions, hoping to rouse them before the evil closed in upon them. He sensed it drawing closer with each ragged breath, his throat tightening as the seconds passed.

The toe of his boot caught the edge of a rock, bringing him crashing forward. As the ground raced to meet his face, a sense of dread overwhelmed him. He had failed as the first watch, just like everyone expected.

*****

The chirping of birds greeted Tyriel as he regained consciousness. He shielded his eyes from the glare of the morning sun in the horizon. A numb pain flared when he ran his hand across his scalp and he noticed a smear of dried blood on the rock where he fell. But he was alive.

A new joy flowed through him as he felt the joy of success. He had not failed, after all, and led them all into the hands of death. He was still alive, and relatively unharmed. Perhaps he might even volunteer for a watch tonight. He took off toward the creek to wash his wound and ease his thirst, but along the way he got a nagging sense that he overlooked something. He shrugged it off to lingering nerves and drank deep from the flowing water, feeling relief as the cold liquid hit his dry throat.

And he realized what was bothering him. He ran back to the camp, weaving around fallen logs and hurdling rocks. He arrived and doubled over, gasping to regain his breath while his eyes confirmed what his mind had feared: everyone was gone.

But their stuff was still here, and the horses still tethered, as though they collectively woke up and wandered off into the forest without him. But he knew better than that. They were lost to the dark creatures during his watch. How was he ever going to explain this to his father?

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This post is my entry into this week’s Master Class session, run by one of the infamous Fab Four members. We were challenged to use the line “Things had been much better when he had been hidden.” from Douglas Adams’ The Long Dark Tea-Time of the Soul. Not only that, but it had to be in a “fourth” position, and mine so happens to fall on the 20th sentence of this post. Be sure to head on over to SAM’s blog and check out the other entries this week!

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For the Scriptic prompt exchange this week, Kirsten gave me this prompt: Nothing happens, and nothing happens, and then everything happens..

I gave kgwaite this prompt: The rain assaulted her skin with heavy droplets as she crouched in the cover of darkness.

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